The first one evokes a sence of "past memories"...very modern edge by playing on the the receding of the main image by asubtle grey shift with a reversal of the texture over the color block. .. I like the right justification of the text which draws the eye back to the image. ... I like how your name is in a nice thick san serif type and how the overall type is positioned in such a way that there is a subtle suggestion that it is a part of that aged crack.....my only suggestion is to perhaps change the serif type to something with a more nostalgic feel to echo the overall mood of this piece.
That is however, just a personal taste of mine :)
THe second card evokes a more "sensual" feeling to it's overall approach.
Once again, excellent typography here...both the san and serif type works in this application beautifully. Lovely colorations..... now with this one I think the texture behind the type is in an off color and competes with the overall esthetic look.... If you could pick up on a light tawny cream color in the image and use that as a textural- watermark in the color block it would bring harmony to the entire peice. :)
Either of these peices would be perfect depended of course to the mood that you are trying to convey. I wish you much success in your show and once again beautifully done. :)
MT
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