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Posted By:  picasso89p
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Posted On:  1/22/2000 6:06 PM 1 Reply

Verbal Magician by my brother Jamie

verbal magician

poetman

gluing together

shattered pieces of experience

sworling realites

metropolises of creation

corners so perfectly laid

every street bypassing

nervous systems alive

etched onto paper

lightning-striked into the mind

CREATION

kept time with heart beat

chanted by the mouth

organically-inate rhythm

the ecstatic march of the body

linguistic wizard with diamond senses

narrowing flashlight beam of perception

food of experience

digests

gray excrement

to shining jewels


poetman
wave your wand

send your spell into the world



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